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The sky is bright, but it's turning into red,
The sun is coming closer,
It seems like the whole world is about to bend.
The earth is shaking, is about of breaking,
Smiling, I look up ahead,
Maybe tomorrow is something we'll not get,
But as long I've got you, I think I'm ready for the end.

They're screaming, running,
Trying to get out alive.
I don't care,
I can see we're about of dying,
This may be the ending,
But I'm sure will come a new start.
There's no use in crying,
So I'll take your hand,
And as long I've got you, I think I'm ready for the end.

The earth is opening, releasing the creatures of the deep,
Flying above us, trying to devour us alive,
But I don't worry, I keep saying "this will be just another trip",
On our shoulders they'll land,
To tore out our eyes,
To cleave our head,
But as long I've got you, I think I'm ready for the end.

The flames of hell seems to come out,
Wanting to quench its blood hunger,
They are desperately running,
From death they think are hiding,
But we'll go right through the fire,
Smiling, I take your hand,
Because as long I've got you, I think I'm ready for the end.
Well,I don't know from where came this,but I wrote it in less than 25 mins.
Honestlly,I Don't know if it's good or no,so I'm wating for your oppinions :meow:
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WhitePhoenixSpirit Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student General Artist
this was beautiful!
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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WhitePhoenixSpirit Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Student General Artist
ur welcome! ur really good at poetry!
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:iconthfan259:
THFan259 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I appreciate :thanks:
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012   Writer
Well, mostly I write short stories and lessons, but poetry...from time to time. Here, this work is quite good, please do not misunderstand me, but as I was reading it, I felt that this could be a very good song lyric.
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I know, it could be a nice song. This one came from nowhere and finished as being different from everything I wrote before :aww:
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:icondogyjoe:
dogyjoe Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012   Writer
Good to know.
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Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011  Student Writer
This is comforting in a sick way :) i love it good job :)
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :D
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Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2011  Student Writer
np
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