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Look into my eyes,
Do you think I'm made of stone?
I'm just exhausted of those useless cries,
I'm sick of feeling alone.

Behind that sick mischievous grin,
The full of hatred tone,
I do have my own dream,
I do have a soul.

Why don't you look into my eyes?
Behind my own stone wall,
That I've built to defend myself from the lies,
That's the way I've chose to be,
Why can't you see the real me?

They say is not true,
The person I'm trying to prove to you.
Maybe they are right,
Is there a real me that I'm trying to hide?
Maybe in time I just turned into a monster,
I destroyed everything was nice from me,
Is this the way I chose to be?

I stare at my own reflection,
An empty sight, pale skin,
The good has been burn,
I think I can't recognize myself,
There's no way to turn.

Destruction became my new passion,
Hurting others is a hobby,
Is this the real me?
Is this the way I chose to be?

I will never believe,
I'm not a monster, not a ghost,
Maybe a dark shadow,
My own dreams I stopped to follow.
Their words pushed me into the hollow,
I embraced the obscurity,
Let it take me far away,
Is this the way I chose to be?
Waiting your opinions :aww:
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:iconandyb1979:
ANDYB1979 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL, IT REMINDS ME OF HOW I HAVE FELT THROUGHOUT ALOT OF STAGES IN MY LIFE.
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :aww:
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ANDYB1979 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
MY ABSOLUTE PLEASURE, LIKE YOUR WORK ALOT :)
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:thanks:
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ANDYB1979 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
:)
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NwgroGuerra Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
great words, sadly true do, It's dumb how society pushes you to dark hole just 'cause you are not the way the want you to be, but the way you embrace the dark side I love it =)
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:thanks: Thanks
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:iconnwgroguerra:
NwgroGuerra Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome and keep living just the way you are
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:iconthfan259:
THFan259 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, because being yourself may be the best way to the happines :D
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:iconnwgroguerra:
NwgroGuerra Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
if there where only more people like you it would be awesome...hehe I don't know if I wrote this in the correct way hehe xD

cheers
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think you wrote okay. I appreciate it. In fact, I'm amazed. Only few people like me. I guess they tend to think that I'm arrogant and selfish, but they are wrong :aww:
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NwgroGuerra Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha ok thank you...hey that happens when they see somebody that instead of ignoring their reality they embraced it and creates something beautiful with it, they just freak out and instead of trying to understand you they prefer to point you as a outcast and treats you like if you are not part of them, but don't worry to go against the flow 'cause at the end when you find what you want and you are happy and they are not that would hit them hard, just keep doing that amazing work and one day all will be worth it you'll see just take care.
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) You're amazing, really. I confess that I won't forget soon your words. You made my day - and probably the next one too - .
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ZoeyJane1132 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
This is really good :squee:
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :thanks:
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Honestly-Not Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Writer
"I embraced the obscurity,
Let it take me far away,
Is this the way I choose to be?"

I love this last stanza, especially the about embracing obscurity; sometimes, I believe the world needs to do that more often. ;)

And having English as your second language, even with a few grammatical errors, this is very impressive, as is the rest of yours that I have read.

Bravo. :) Emotional expression, all the way.
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :thanks: I appreciate very much :)
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Honestly-Not Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2011  Student Writer
You're very welcome. :D
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Rieiel22 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Student Writer
nicely done ^^
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ViperStripes Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Student General Artist
This is a very lovely piece, though there are a few mishaps and errors with grammar here and there. If you look back over and revise it, it will be absolute wonderful! :)
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you,I appreciate:aww: I know there are a few mistakes,I'm working on correcting them :thanks:
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ViperStripes Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011  Student General Artist
You're very welcome :aww:! Good luck with your future writing :)!
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miias Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
beautiful, tears coming up into my eyes :(
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
aw,thank you :aww:.I really appreciate :)
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miias Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
no prob,keep it going on, you're good :)
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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HyperDeanPie Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Very nicely written and emotional. I could really feel it when I read it. :D
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:iconthfan259:
THFan259 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :aww:
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HyperDeanPie Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome. :D
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UCPoika Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
:llama:
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katsumoto82 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
dark and beautiful
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:iconthfan259:
THFan259 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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Whispersareheard Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Exceptional....I could connect to it so easily...
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:iconthfan259:
THFan259 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :aww:
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dwillsn Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
"Do think I'm made of stone?" i think you may have wanted a "you" in there, other than that it's very good :D
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
yes,it was a "you" there :XD: and thanks ^^
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dwillsn Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :)
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