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Another day, another show,
Put on the mask, do another bow,
Fake a smile and wipe your tears,
Is time to play again the role.

When it comes to an end,
You are gonna find out it was just pretend,
No, it wasn't how they said,
They never really cared.

It was all your fault,
They've been just following the script,
You've been too involved,
Opened wide your heart,
Let them see what you've got inside.
But they tore it apart, they stabbed it,
Left you bleeding close to death.

Try to get up, try to erase your mind, breathe deep inside,
You say you'll start it all over, change youself forever,
But somewhere, the real you,
Hides far away from here,
Waiting to come back, for a new start.

Are you really inside cold as ice?
Are you really sick of these lies?
But take a look around, you do the same,
Now you are the one to blame,
Pretending to be something that you've never been…

This life is a show,
For you, for me, even for them all,
You can never know what are they hiding,
Like you do,
Their darkest fears, painfull memories…

The performance is over, the curtains go down,
Throw away the mask, this time nobody won.
Say goodbye to everyone, even if they don't care,
Close your eyes, pull the trigger,
End up the nightmare…
Tell me your oppinions ^^
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tetre Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
i appreciated ''the real you'' cuz many people try to be like another one.
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you do. Everyone should be however they what to...
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tetre Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
yes we should( be ourselves )
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:aww:
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YukiUchiha21 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012   General Artist
i love this! i love the idea and the dramatic finish! it flows very well and it makes sense. wonderful job!!!
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :aww:
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012   Writer
My opinion is, good use of words and ideas. Also my opinion is that We are the ones who creates the nightmare(s) and We can end it but not with a trigger, but smoothly, with a paper and a pencil :aww:

Thank you for sharing :pray:
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I ended like that because I wanted to add more drama :D But in reality, I would never give up like that. There's always a way out :aww:
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dogyjoe Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012   Writer
:)
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Xadrea Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
@__________@
this is exactly what I am painting about right now! would you mind if I referenced this work to inform my paintings further? and if I did, could I have your name to give you proper attributions?
(I'm in college so just referencing your work without your permission would be straight up plagarism:XD:)

the poem, by the way, is really lyrical! i love it! the imagery is really great!
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