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Bloody murderer…
Damned soul collector…


Tell me, how could you extort the life out of those shiny, brown eyes?!
         
I'm vividly smiling as he slowly dies…

Tell me, didn't you fell a thing while giving the poisonous kiss?
I feel every beating of his heart as we are immersing in the bliss…


A soul collector, destroyer of the mind,
I'm about to extinguish his light, to leave him lost and blind…
I'll encage his ripped soul,
Just after he'll lose the self-control…

Don't drag another soul into your disgrace,
Just one more blanked face…

Don't kill again with your breath-taking embrace,
I promise, just one more… one more stolen core…


You know you shouldn't, but your claws are digging already in his chest,
I'm spilling his blood, the flesh I wrest…

Don't collect this soul, not this time,
I must capture his soul before he captures mine,
I promise, just one more... one more crime…


His eyes are open but the light has died,
Soulless, through the dark he'll abide,
Soulless, wandering blind,
Still, his eyes are open wide …

I just tried to share the love that is breaking my chest,
But the venom is running through my veins, I'm just… a pest,
My heart is just a hand of dust, I can only infest…


Bloody murderer…
Damned soul collector…

  
I am…
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:iconkarlikbezcokolady:
karlikbezcokolady Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Professional Writer
great
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :thanks:
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theWitchofGrich Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
Soulless, through the dark he'll abide,
Soulless, wandering blind,
Still, his eyes are open wide …

my God, this is brilliant!!! :D :D
so dark and so emotional :D :D

I love it!! :D
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :thanks:
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ninjatakes321 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
you'll embrace death one day and you will find her to be gentle and warm....leaving your cage and living the light, the soul collector will take away the journey and pain, live your life in everlasting happiness


oh god my head hurts..
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Imagine a man. He screams out his lungs because the flames are taking over his body. His flesh is on fire because let's say... he tried to save a little girl from a burning apartment.She goes out alive but he " embraced the death". Please, go tell him how gentle the death was; well, at least it was warm.

I have another wish. Could you please send me message when you find the everlasting happiness?

If you don't like my writing you could stop reading. I didn't force you to read my rant.
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selena-lenoir Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Uhm...yes. So much yes. I love this. So much. This piece is beautiful and dark. To not want to break someone yet not being able to pull away from the habit...the wonderful adrenaline rush that comes from feeling the person break. From knowing that you are the reason the light has died. Wonderfully done.
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :thanks:
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selena-lenoir Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
You're welcome! :D
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ThatGirl46 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
This is soo Cool! It's deep and morbid. I like it.
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