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The curse of the deafening howl stays within him,
Yellow chipped claws will rip off their skin,
His red, scarred eyes possessed by grim,
The silence breaks, a rallying cry,
He’s doomed for aye!
Nocturnal crime and silent sky,
The Great Wolf is still alone in the dead of the night,
He’s doomed for aye!
The blind rage wrapped its cold fingers around his neck again,
His sight get’s blurry as the hate coils around him like a chain,
Sweet obscurity has taken over his mind,
He will never be refined,
As the madness inside him, the moon owns the sky,
He’s doomed for aye!
Into the corrupt scenery of odd,
This night the evil comes unfold,
He stepped out,
The filthy human race will wash away with blood,
The Great Wolf will tear out their frail, empty hearts,
For they wanted war tonight it starts,
His yellow fangs, the spark of life will tear away,
For they wanted death it will be given without delay,
A lightning strikes the sky,
He’s doomed for aye!
The Great Wolf digs into the flesh of his own creation,
Without elation,
Blood splashes, shouts invading the night,
It has come – the final eradication,
Surviving is out of sight,
Soul by soul will be doomed to hell by the speed of light,
From his blood stained snout evades a painful cry,
They are doomed for aye…
Yellow chipped claws will rip off their skin,
His red, scarred eyes possessed by grim,
The silence breaks, a rallying cry,
He’s doomed for aye!
Nocturnal crime and silent sky,
The Great Wolf is still alone in the dead of the night,
He’s doomed for aye!
The blind rage wrapped its cold fingers around his neck again,
His sight get’s blurry as the hate coils around him like a chain,
Sweet obscurity has taken over his mind,
He will never be refined,
As the madness inside him, the moon owns the sky,
He’s doomed for aye!
Into the corrupt scenery of odd,
This night the evil comes unfold,
He stepped out,
The filthy human race will wash away with blood,
The Great Wolf will tear out their frail, empty hearts,
For they wanted war tonight it starts,
His yellow fangs, the spark of life will tear away,
For they wanted death it will be given without delay,
A lightning strikes the sky,
He’s doomed for aye!
The Great Wolf digs into the flesh of his own creation,
Without elation,
Blood splashes, shouts invading the night,
It has come – the final eradication,
Surviving is out of sight,
Soul by soul will be doomed to hell by the speed of light,
From his blood stained snout evades a painful cry,
They are doomed for aye…
Literature
The Right Hand Curse Reversed
Everything that my right hand has ever written
Comes from the heart and mind of a boy that is cursed
So from now on I’ll learn to write with my left hand
In hope not expectation that this curse will be reversed
And then I shall sit in front of an open fire
Unflinching as each flame licks closer to my face
Not close enough though so it could swallow me whole
But just close enough so that it can have a taste
Of the beads of regret in my perspiration
That are forming and rolling down my furrowed brow
From a wildfire mind that is now out of control
Come thoughts that these damp morals fail to disallow
Everything that my right hand has ev
Literature
Unclassified.
Unclassified.
I am not British nor am I English,
I am a member of the planet earth.
My skin is black making it hard to distinguish
That I do not belong to any specific turf.
Although my passport may say otherwise
And there may be boxes I am forced to tick.
My Continental ties are instrumental in their eyes.
Just like you, I am vulnerable to stones and sticks.
My hair may be curly and my nose may be wide
But my extremities are bound to any communal cemetery.
If you would be willing to compare a picture of our insides.
You will see that our differences are purely elementary.
Yet you are conditioned to see me as incompatible
And this mispl
Literature
It Came From The Dark
It Came From The Dark:
Amongst the ashes, swirling from the darkness of the pit,
Emerged a hand, dragging a battered body across the rocks.
Blood leaked from the wounds so callously self-inflicted,
And teeth ground with a focused determination and seething anger.
It cared not for the warm rubies - staining the jagged rocks,
It cared not for the sensation of pain...
All that it remembered was a dream, An obsession -
One that drove it ever higher; ignoring all else!
Eventually it emerged from this shadowy hole, this dreary depth,
And in that moment, it learned of the truth.
For this creature, denied sunlight and warmth -
was me...
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Critique from PowerfulWriting
I like how descriptive you are in this. You use great imagery here and your word choice is great. I think you set the scene really well. Some of my favorite parts are:
"Into the corrupt scenery of odd,
This night the evil comes unfold,"
and
"Nocturnal crime and silent sky,
The Great Wolf is still alone in the dead of the night, "
However, I do feel that some of the imagery could be stronger. Ex: "His yellow fangs". HOW yellow is his fangs. What could you compare the yellow to? Go a bit further, just a bit.
One thing I will say is that the "Doomed for aye" doesn't seem to work well here. At least, not after every stanza. It comes off a bit too repetitive. Most of the stanzas except maybe the first and the last, sound BETTER if you left that part out.
Otherwise, good work.
I like how descriptive you are in this. You use great imagery here and your word choice is great. I think you set the scene really well. Some of my favorite parts are:
"Into the corrupt scenery of odd,
This night the evil comes unfold,"
and
"Nocturnal crime and silent sky,
The Great Wolf is still alone in the dead of the night, "
However, I do feel that some of the imagery could be stronger. Ex: "His yellow fangs". HOW yellow is his fangs. What could you compare the yellow to? Go a bit further, just a bit.
One thing I will say is that the "Doomed for aye" doesn't seem to work well here. At least, not after every stanza. It comes off a bit too repetitive. Most of the stanzas except maybe the first and the last, sound BETTER if you left that part out.
Otherwise, good work.