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Words, words, words... by Kublakhan27

Words by DraganTheMighty

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Sardonic laughers, sick lullabies,
We'll make you pay for all your sins,
With hatred, madness in our eyes.

Welcome to the room 259,
We'll enjoy to see you dyin',
In a comfy, bloody bed,
Well, darling, that's the price for lyin' !

"I just want to see what you've got inside,
You're so pretty on the outside,
I promise you,
Your stomach will be sew,
It will look like new."

In that corner,
A pretty girl is crying,
Fallen on her knees,
To God she's praying,
Screaming out her lungs,
For forgiveness she's begging.
Nobody can't save her now, even God
We have no mercy, we'll love to spill her blood,
We'll rip off her skin to see,
Now how beautiful she can be,
How many hearts she will break again?

We've got nothing to gain,
But it doesn't matter,
We like to make them suffer,
And forever we'll stay alive,
To punish them, to make justice,
Their heads to cleave,
The revenge for the betrayed ones we will bring.

A dying men is crawling on the floor,
He's screaming blood,
While is trying to get to the door.
But he won't get that far,
Because we chopped his leg,
Let's see now who's the lame,
Who's the one with the plague?
We poured acid on his face,
We burst into laugh watching his bloody trace.

Welcome to the room 259,
We'll love to see you sufferin',
Drown you in blood,
Hang you by a gut,
Everything will be alright.
It took me a week to wrote it,but I love it :D
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psycoblackwidow Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yay! nice
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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Aslehill12 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this poem. Violent cruel and awesome. Love dark poetry.
Aslehill12 or Alice Mad Dreamer :)
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^^
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betweenhalves Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student General Artist
I love this poem, I write a lot of poetry as well and should be posting it soon. The dark side of things is always fun to write about.
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you like it. Thanks :D
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NwgroGuerra Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
once again wow
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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NwgroGuerra Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=D
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zombieater Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2012
This is hardcore! Some writing you have, other textes of yours are abit obscure, but this one is pure rage. Hey, thanks for faving that sunset of mine!
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