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Up on the sky,the moonlight is so bright,
But as I look at your face, I can't understand what happened this night.
Your body is cold,but so my heart,
Your flesh is torn apart, but so was  my soul,
When you left me all alone.

Painfull screamings, tears and blood,
Are hauting me tonight,
But it doesn't matter, I don't care,
I can live with all this blame.

Your whacked body lying down there
But trust me, this time,
You ain't going anywhere.

I yelled at you –come back to me!
You said-no,
But I couldn't let this be…
I grabbed your hands and begged you-don't!
You pushed me away, tried to leave again,
With my face soaked in tears I sworn-this ain't gonna be this way…

Blind rage, frustration, broken soul,
This night they took again control,
They blurred my eyes and mind,
Through the shadows of the night,
I've let the anger be my guide…

So I've pulled out the knife,
I stabbed you in the back,
This night I ended your life.
Well,I'm waiting for your opprinions ^^
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:iconwhitephoenixspirit:
WhitePhoenixSpirit Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Love it!
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:thanks:
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dragonflame15 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Student Digital Artist
wow - this is dark but i like it

it's written well and the descriptions are great!!!
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GwenMalfoy Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifuly writen! You do wonderful at painting a picture I love it
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much ^^
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GwenMalfoy Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
your most welcome :D
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LivingInTheMusic Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
love this!!!!!! it is amazing!!
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D
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LivingInTheMusic Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
np!
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VisoredFan1293 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Student General Artist
like it!!! so reminds me of a Justin LawxOC fanfiction type of thing!!
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