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A shout, a corpse,
At the midnight,
Xayller is spilling again blood,
Delighted by the fear,
The cries, the screams,
Is what he loves to hear.

A beast at the night,
Knocking on the door,
He'll tell you everything will be alright,
But then your whole world will fall,
Xayller is trying to get your core,
Because he's empty on the inside,
Xayller got no soul.

The flesh is torn apart, the ribs are smashed,
But this night Xayller is not the same,
He screams for help,
Knowing he's the one to blame.

She told him, "You own my heart",
At the night, in the backyard,
Staring at the moonlight,
Xayller layed her on the ground,
She didn't know what's coming,
She didn't know her chest will be opening.

His bloodshot eyes,
She saw in then a wild highlight,
His claws touching her ribs,
Xayller thought that her heart can be his,
She starts to scream, to beg him not,
But Xayller is looking for a heart,
So he won't stop.

With the claws he's digging in the flesh,
Her ribs he'll smash,
While the blood is running out,
Finally the heart he found.

Xayller is tearing it out,
She's still screaming blood,
The heart beats in his hands,
But it slowly stops,
A bleeding, dead heart is all he got.

Xayller is screaming at the midnight sky,
Realizing what he really did,
Xayller is asking"-Why?!"
He's crying, shouting, trying to put her heart back,
Trying to bring her to life.

On his face the blood is spilled,
Xayller thought he has no heart,
But all this time he did,
Xayller is choking with the tears,
Now love, hate, pain,
Is what he feels.

Finally he found a heart,
Xayller is still hiding in the dark,
With her corpse,
Trying to bring her back to life…
I don't know sure if the name "Xayller" is really existing, but I like it :D
Well, I hope you'll like my poem :aww:
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:iconnightreign123:
Nightreign123 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
Interesting poem, but a bit crude.
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's the point :)
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Nightreign123 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Writer
Oh, how so?
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WhitePhoenixSpirit Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Woah... very nicely done
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I appreciate :D
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3rddemonbro Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
im thinking yours and mine are the only entries for this contest lol
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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3rddemonbro Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
:D
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Epicaracacy Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Student Writer
Tis very cool. Is xayller said (zay-ler)? Its awesome
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ^^ . And yeah, like that is said :D
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mercipher Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Student
nice, nice :3
I really like the concept!
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :aww:
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itotallycantdraw-woo Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. I was completely hooked into this. I absolutely could not stop reading that. Deliciously dark and disgusting. I love it!
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :aww:
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MyChemicalRodents Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I second that - the name is gorgeous :iconloveitplz: and the plot so twisted and sad :iconsadplz: awww, poor Xayller :hug:
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. I rreally like the fact that you are by his side :aww: Because, while writting that I've been by his side too :D
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MyChemicalRodents Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He's a misunderstood creature, who couldn't grasp the concept of life and love - why wouldn't we be by his side? :iconluffsfromafriend:
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Great, you really got the idea :)
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Ard0R0us Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Unusually disturbing 'romance' - oriented poem. It's a change from the more 'ordinary' types typically found when going through submissions requesting approval. So how would you pronounce the name you created? Just curious.

I found the imagery disturbing and also wondered what his motivation was for committing the acts he was engaging in. If that was what you were going for it worked.
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, it's pronunced like "Sailer", but with "X" instead of "S" :aww:
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Ard0R0us Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I wondered. So do you have any other writings aside from your 'dark' pieces? How about one that you are particularly proud of?
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, I don't have an "non-dark" piece. One that I'm proud of is [link] , but still dark. A bit positive is [link] , but it has a dark background
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Ard0R0us Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Interesting...

You seem a bit like Wednesday from the Addams Family to me.

In a good way.
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:iconthfan259:
THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, thanks I suppose :D
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:iconard0r0us:
Ard0R0us Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You are welcome.

You should consider taking more portraits. IMO.
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:iconthfan259:
THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yea, maybe I will :aww:
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Risigma Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Dark and wery well written :D
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THFan259 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :aww:
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