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Your Bloody Ending

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Why are you crying?
Why are you yelling?
Look deep inside of my eyes, do you think I care?
Honestly, tell me, what are you seeing there?

A wild smile on my face,
A burning fire in my eyes,
I just can't wait to end up your lies!

The hatchet shines into the silver moonlight,
The wind blows so reassuring this night,
I hear your hard breath, I can feel the fear in it,
I see your tears racing down your face, while you are begging for mercy.

Don't be scared my love,
Aren't you the one that asked for this?
It will come true in a trice.

Started to cleave your chest,
The blood runs, while you are screaming your lungs out.
Dear, please, shut up,
I'm trying to tear your heart out!
So you did with mine,
It's my turn now, we must keep the line…

Your cyan eyes, shined so bright,
Sparkled in the dark, like a guiding light,
They turned to crimson, they look so dead…
Your angelic smile, fade away forever,
Your face is drown in blood, you're gone from now,
But I think like this is so much better.

One last kiss, from your bloody lips,
One last hug, from your torn corpse,
I promise you, my heart keeps,
This last moment with you forever...
I would like to know your sincere opinions about my poem ^^
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dragonflame15's avatar
wow, just like the other one i critiqued (can't remember the name sorry - i'm forgetful) it's written well and the descriptions are amazing.

keep the good work up! :D